Monday, December 6, 2010

Shyanne

Winter is coming
Winter is coming snow is falling
Ho,ho,ho i see a little doe
Everywhere you go there will be snow
Come and play its a snowy day
Its an invitation for participation
It is a happy snow day right away!
Hooray!
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6 comments:

  1. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:26 PM

    Shyanne, I really like your poem,and you are great
    plus I like what you did with your words there.


    From Carmen

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  2. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:35 PM

    I like your poem and your rhyming.



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    Triston

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  3. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    I like your poem Aweosome , shyanne From Mercedez

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  4. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:38 PM

    I like how you put ho oh ho!
    From:Devon

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  5. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:39 PM

    Phenomenal poem,Shyanne!I liked your word choice and rhyming words.


    From Jared

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  6. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:40 PM

    Shyanne, I like how you made the words rhyming



    from,
    Jonah

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