Monday, December 6, 2010

Samantha

Beautiful Snow
Snow glistens in the beautiful winter day
And some people prey
My family just sit there
And pet my hare
Snow can make you cry
Snow can make you happy
Either way you would be sad if the beautiful snow was gone!
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4 comments:

  1. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    Geat job! I liked how you rhymed in the beginning, and also how you told how much you enjoy snow.
    From,
    JR

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  2. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    I like how you rhymed alot of words.
    from,Dorthia

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  3. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:29 PM

    Samantha,I like how you tried your best and made an excellent.From:Devina

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  4. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:35 PM

    Samantha, that was a great poem that you wrote!!
    One way that can improve is that you could make sure your spelling is written correctly.

    From:Alejandra

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