Winter is fun winter is here.
Winter has snow and winter gives you cheer.
its every thing winter is bulding snow mans
and having some hot cocoa wintetr is here ya
Your good at making rhyms from noah
ReplyDeleteYour poem was interesting, and I liked how you told things you can do in winter.
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JR
Awesome Mercedez,but you probraly could have added a little bit more. From,Shyanne
ReplyDeleteMercedez,I like what you did,but you did great at
ReplyDeleteit Nice Job!!
From Carmen
Hey, Mercedez that was a great poem that you posted. One way that you can do better is that instead of using the word here, use a better word.
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