Whales go south for winter Insects go in houses Nobody goes out side without a coat Talking about cristmas Eating dealesious cookie's Resting for Santa Clause
Hey,Kory I think you could improve more by adding a little bit more of details for your poem.Kory,I think it sounds amazing,and I like how you said eating delicious cookies.I think you are an amazing writer. From:Julian
I like the way you dicribed winter and what people do!
ReplyDeleteI think you should add a little more though.
From,Samantha
HI,Kory,I like the way you used how animals and insects use hibarnasion. From:james [jag]
ReplyDeleteHey,Kory I think you could improve more by adding a little bit more of details for your poem.Kory,I think it sounds amazing,and I like how you said eating delicious cookies.I think you are an amazing writer.
ReplyDeleteFrom:Julian
nice poem but i dont get da part of waitin 4 santa or sometin like that wat does it mean?
ReplyDeletenice poem but i don't get were your resting for Santa clause
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