Tuesday, December 7, 2010

Julia

Winter is fun
Winter is here
It brings you happy cheer
It makes you have goosebumps o dear!
we are all gifts from god
We are snow flakes from above!

*WINTER CHEER*
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6 comments:

  1. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:24 PM

    That made me crack up! I realy think you should have added a little bit more.
    From,Samantha

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  2. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:31 PM

    Hey, Julia I think Winter fun sounds awesome,and I like how it give people goosebumps.By the way I think it was an amazing poem you wrote
    From: Julian

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  3. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:39 PM

    Hey Julia I really like your poem. I think you should win an award for writing the awsoest poem ever


    your friend
    Triston

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  4. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:40 PM

    Julia, I like what you did, and you are pretty.



    From Carmen

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  5. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    I like how you started the poem off, and I have to agree snow is fun

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  6. jadenJanuary 12, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    I like how you deskrived winter.But you shoud add more detail.

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