''Winter Breeze'' JR
The most wonderfull time of the year, that spreads joy and cheer. Winter brings snow that will often come and go. All the children are often exited, because in their hearts, a warm spark is lighted. Everyone is together, no matter how bad the weather. Winter is magical, even with all its icicles.
I really like the way you talk about children having fun.
ReplyDeleteHey, J.R, that was a great poem that you wrote.One thing that you can work on is that you proofread your poem because you forget the letter C in excited.
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