Winter is the best time of the year and so have a holly jolly year.
In the middle of winter go down town to see what a wonderful winter it is this year.
Nothing is better better than you.
Thanks to winter you can have a nice time of the year.
Eat a cake it is you .for the fun time of the year be merry.
Reason I'm writing this cause you can have a fun time of the year.
Jonah, I liked how you made sence,and had a happy poem.From:Devina
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you decribed what you do in winter!
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on putting words in and making your writting not confusing.
From,Samantha
Jonah,I really like how you wrote about Winter.I am so like this poem.I think you rock!By the way I like your poem.
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