Monday, December 6, 2010

Jakob

WINTER CHILL
Winter chill, Winter chill
Like ice swords, breaking
through my shield of wool,
To create better lairs of
defense wool,
having friends helping me
against the storm
To complete my
defense of invisibility.
by Jakob
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2 comments:

  1. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:19 PM

    I think your poem is cool and has good rhymes

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  2. Kemp All-StarsDecember 7, 2010 at 2:29 PM

    Jakob, that was interesting, and it also made me think that you are amazing at poetry!
    From,
    JR

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