Tuesday, December 7, 2010

Dorthia

By:Dorthia
winter love
withblankets of snow
it creates such a glow
how I love the white
that is so bright
this day I was haunted
so I knew what I wanted
so I grabbed my list
to give santa my wish

5 comments:

  1. I like the way you rhymed!
    I think you should add a little bit more though.
    From,Samantha

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  3. Awesome job,Dorthia I liked how you were talking about Santa the way you used the title Winter Love. From, Shyanne

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  4. I loved your story i like santa he is really cool.

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  5. How can u involve spuky with lovely.I liket your story.

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