Monday, December 6, 2010

Devina

Winter
Clear as day snow is here,
It reminds me of a white deer,
It's very nice and cold,
And it even looks like gold,
Winter is my favorite season,
Now you tell me your reason.
Winter is as cold as ice,
It's very white and clear,
It makes me smile just to see it,
I'm so glad winters here.

2 comments:

  1. I like how you did not miss anything in your writing.
    from,Dorthia

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  2. I really liked how you used lots of figurative language, and explained yourself very well. That was phenomenal!
    From,
    JR

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